Sunday, August 22, 2021

good lines, anybody?

 I am so happy that I am finally feeling energetic and happy again. My old bubbly self has come to surface again and I am full of hopes and ideas for my future. I am still not sure which direction I am going to take in my life, but I can report that the old strong woman is back :-)

I am pondering job options from getting into the american legal field, to opening my own home decluttering business to getting a random 9 to 5 job or becoming a pro domme. As you can see, lol, I am really still at the brain storming phase. There are soooo many options, lol. 

But now, without further ado,  lets talk about a more interesting subject:  Namely writing lines in the F/M context.

I am working on a little kinky side project at the moment, (I will tell you more about it in one of the next posts), and I am wondering:  when it comes to writing (punishment) lines for your wife/lady/domme, what is a line that worked for you? I mean: what is a good line that triggers all the right good spots in your heart, mind and dick?

Write it down in the comments or send me a short email.

16 comments:

  1. Dear Miss Tina;

    For me, it's less about the words themselves than the whole scene of being made to write them, preferably while sitting on a hard chair with a freshly spanked bare bottom.

    That said, the sentences should be fairly short, to fit on one line, and it should state the infraction to further humiliate the miscreant.

    "I will not talk back to Miss Tina."
    "I will not touch myself without permission."
    "I will not play with Miss Tina's panties."
    "I am a naughty boy and deserve to be punished."

    You get the idea. Several hundred of those or similar will have a misbehaving boy thinking twice about his choices.

    -FL

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  2. Thanks, FL. I understand where you are coming from. I agree in thinking/feeling that it is less about the words than about the energy of the moment/scene.
    Thanks for the line suggestions!

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    1. Early bedtime...oh yes, I have given that as a punishment too :-)

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    2. My wife has also punished me in the past by writing penal lines after hitting my bare butt hard beforehand. That is increasingly difficult and painful than you want. But it must also be punishment. Now my wife no longer punishes by writing punishments rules. My wife decides what punishment I get if I don't do my best with my studies. In the last year that is after also hitting my bare buttocks hard. Is that or a penalty cornertime punishment 30 to 90 minutes depending on what I did wrong and naughty. Or early punishments before bedtime, usually at 18 pm. Right after dinner. But Monday spanking and punishment early before bed at 18 pm

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  4. Dear Tina,Writing lines is probably the most powerful tool for a mistress she can take you a whole day in 2 minutes or days depending on how big the punishment is.I must confess though I get triggered when the line says "writing Lines" like :
    I must write lines until my fingers burn and learn not to be naughty.
    I must sit at my desk all day writing lines for Back talking to my miss.
    I am always getting in trouble and lose my weekends writing lines
    However writing lines is always a severe punishment and in my opinion should always be done under the supervision or control of the mistress so that the sub doesn't take any breaks (yes a cramping hand has to be it has to hurt) and after 2-3 pages it's not fun or sexy and the mistress can lie back and relax while the man thinks for hours about what his role is.
    a spanking doesn't always have to be after 5-6 hours of writing lines your hand hurts enough the next day and tells you to behave.
    greetings from germany

    D.K from H

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    1. :-)
      I have seen the enormous amounts of lines that you wrote lately.

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    2. it's almost addictive to read or listen to the words get pen and paper and you know now is the end of the fun lol

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  5. Delighted to read that you are 'back on the horse' as they used to say in the States!
    I have often quoted your work to others, carefully censored. Well, I say 'others', I mean 'ladies whom I am courting with a view to engaging in our loving WLM' :)
    So, no spanking.
    Yet ;)

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    1. John, it is great to hear from you.
      Very good to know that you are out there and quoting my work :-)

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  6. I like writing lines, but I'm not into the several hours variety. Life is to busy for that. However, even if the repetition is only, say, 25 lines, they are subject to correction if the neatness is not up to Her standards. And it never is, of course. So 25 the in the first round may result in, say, 15 needing correction. She has control of how long the process can last.

    Naturally, each unacceptable line incurs a punishment, and the degree of discipline increases with each round. For example, each poorly written line in the first round may merit 5 strokes of the cane. Poor ones in the second round may merit double -- 10 strokes per poor line. Etc.

    Any good line can work, but my all-time favorite is:

    "I will not masturbate without [name's] permission."

    Always leads to a very sorry bottom and lots of other fun afterwards!

    Graham

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  7. Lines can be fun and rewarding but life is too busy for hours of line writing. She usually prescribes 25 up to an occasional 50. That said, poor penmanship or lack of neatness requires repeated lines. So an initial 25 may have, say, 15 that don't meet Her standard. I've sometimes had 4 or 5 rounds before She was satisfied.

    And, of course, each substandard line is subject to discipline, which increases each round. Each poor line in the initial round may result in 5 strokes of the cane, pretty damn hard on the bare. Those still not up to standard in the 2nd round may merit 19 strokes each. Etc.

    So I end up with an extremely sore bottom and She's very happy with the control and power She has exercised over me.

    It almost always leads to further fun and satisfaction for both parties, though my priority (and great pleasure) is to ensure that She's fully sated.

    Best regards, Graham

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    1. Happy to hear that she has you under her control, Graham :-)

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  8. Dear Tina,

    Writing lines can be very effective in our household, but our lives are too busy for hours on end. She usually requires about 25 lines, though sometimes it may be 50. Naturally, each line must be up to Her standards. If my neatness or penmanship falls short on any lines, then those must be repeated. This can result in 3, 4 or even 5 rounds before She is satisfied.

    Of course, each substandard line is also met with traditional discipline. If the first round has, say, 15 substandard lines, then each of those may merit 5 strokes of the cane. Very hard and on the bare, naturally. The inadequate lines in the second round would result in even more severity to drive the point home…maybe 10 strokes for each such line. Etc.

    By the time it’s over, I have a very sore bottom and She is quite satisfied with Her ability both to command me and to evoke the best out of me.

    These sessions almost always lead to further activities to the great pleasure of both parties, though I always remember that my first priority is pleasing Her whatever that takes at that moment.

    As for my favorite line, that’s easy:

    “I will not masturbate without [name’s] permission.”

    Like many men, I’m a chronic masturbator when not locked up, so this scenario often comes in handy and the effect lasts for quite a long time.

    Finally, this is a great for a “confession” scene. I still find that embarrassing every time I have to confess whether of my own volition or Her asking me if I have anything to confess. I would never lie about this one, as it would make me feel way to guilty!

    All the best.

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    1. I LOVE confession scenes too. They are awesome.

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